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A Night in The Lonesome October


William Morrow and Company
Fiction, Humor/Horror
Themes: Anthropomorphism, Avians, Canids, Classics, Country Tales, Cross-Genre, Curses, Demons, Familiars, Felines, Hidden Wonders, Occult, Religious Themes, Shapeshifters and Werebeasts, Small Animals, Vampires and the Undead, Weirdness, Witches and Wizards
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Description

Full moons have power, as does the night of Halloween. When the two coincide, great and terrible things may happen... depending on who involves themselves, and whether they stand for preserving the world or opening doorways to elder gods who may destroy everything. The dog Snuff, loyal familiar of cursed sorcerer Jack, has been through these events more than once in his long life, but this year's convergence in the English countryside already has unusual hallmarks, drawing all manner of strange characters and their own animal familiars. Before, Jack and his allies have managed to keep the elder entities at bay, but this time, dangerous newcomers are violating nearly every rule and custom to ensure that they fail, and even a loyal familiar like Snuff may not be able to save the day.

Review

This is one of those classics I keep meaning to get to, generally at a more seasonably-appropriate time (this being a very springlike mid-March, with the novel taking place over the 31 days of October), but it's understandably harder to secure the audiobook though the library in autumn. In any event, I'm not sure if it would've been notably improved by the proper atmosphere, for while the prose could be amusing and there are some very interesting and imaginative ideas and images at play, the whole starts feeling less like its own horror tale and more like a fanfic mashup of various gothic figures familiar from page and silver screen, to the point of distracting absurdity.
The narrator, Snuff, makes allusions to the histories of himself, his master (who, though never explicitly named, is clearly Jack the Ripper as well as a very long-lived sorcerer), and the October ritual that may or may not end the world. When not protecting his master on nightly jaunts for spell ingredients, he's protecting the master from various entities contained in various parts of their home (such as the "Thing in the Circle" that keeps trying to tempt Snuff to free it by transforming into various exotic lady canines, and the often-threatening "Thing in the Wardrobe" up in the attic) and keeping an eye on the other local "players" in the coming "game". As part of the latter duties, he develops professional relationships with the other masters' and mistresses' familiars that range from friendly to antagonistic; the cat Greymalk, familiar of local "mad" witch Jill, is perhaps his closest friend, even when they realize that their keepers are destined to stand on opposite sides of the conflict.
At first, Snuff views it all with a certain weary familiarity. This isn't his first supernatural rodeo, after all. But when dead bodies turn up near his house, a wild card turns up in the form of a neighbor with a wolfish secret who may or may not be a player, and other oddities (such as a detective and his portly companion poking their noses into things) shake that complacency, Snuff starts feeling his first sense that maybe master Jack won't come out on the winning side come the end of October. The strongest parts of the story are Snuff's interactions with his fellow familiars, underlings with their own agendas that may or may not coincide with the humans they serve. The humans, on the other hand... despite what Hollywood and many comic book "multiverses" seem to insist, there are only so many disparate "worlds" and rules one can throw together before it just starts getting a bit ridiculous. Here, there's Jack the Ripper, Count Dracula (who keeps a company of stereotype "Gypsy" followers, not the only trace of unfortunate dating in the book), Sherlock Holmes and Watson, Larry Talbot (the Wolfman), Doctor Frankenstein and Igor and the Creature, and numerous others I didn't recognize off the top of my head but which were clearly lifted from other works. They draw too much attention to themselves and clutter the game board until the game itself is almost an afterthought. As a result, the climax feels weirdly muted, too surreal to even begin to care about the stakes or who wins or loses, with a bit of a deus ex machina thrown in the middle. The ending just kind of shrugs the whole thing off with a glib final line that doesn't even fit what we readers were told earlier about the consequences for whoever loses the contest (not really a spoiler if there's not really a point).
This is the second swing-and-miss for Zelazny for me, so I'm pretty sure he's just not an author I'm equipped to really enjoy, for all that I can appreciate some of the writing and the concepts. He may be an inspiration to many in the genre, but for me I fear he's just too dated and not my cup of cocoa.

 

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Forever After


Baen
Fiction, Anthology/Fantasy/Humor
Themes: Dinosaurs, Dragons, Epics, Twists, Wizards
***

Description

The war is over. Evil Lord Kalaran has fallen to Prince Rango's forces of light, aided by four powerful magical artifacts obtained in mind-bendingly dangerous quests from the four corners of the world. In the days before Rango's wedding to the beautiful (not to mention brave and deadly) Princess Rissa, the land heaves a sigh of relief as the balm of peace soothes the scars of war... or not. Things have been downright strange around the capital city of Caltus lately. Sourceless music booms through the night sky. Great sinkholes devour lakes. Mountains sink and rise overnight. Impossible animals roam the countryside. And three comets of ill omen shine in the night skies.
Clearly, something isn't right.
The problem, sages seem to agree, is the very four artifacts that saved the land. Having that many items with that much potency so close together warps and wears on the very fabric of reality. Unless they want the world to drown in a sea of chaos, the artifacts need to be scattered... returned from whence they came, or stashed in some other suitably out-of-the-way place until there is need to quest for them again. Prince Rango gathers the four heroic companions who found the artifacts and sends them forth once more. But there is some dispute about the true cause of the reality disruptions, and the questors each start to wonder the same thing: will getting rid of the artifacts save the land, or doom it?

Review

There's a certain irony in the fact that the last book the late Roger Zelazny worked on before his untimely demise is the first book of his that I happen to read. In truth, this is more of an anthology: he came up with the idea, the quests' plotlines, and the between-quest chapters that tied them all together, but the four tales themselves were each written by a different author.
Technicalities aside...
As light fantasies go, Forever After proves hit and miss. It pokes fun at the conventions of epic fantasy without being cruel or belittling, but much of the humor depends on references to our world as bits of it - (dated) modern and historical - dribble into their land through the reality distortions. It gets tiresome, being expected to laugh at the sweet, brown fizzy drink that replaces all the castle wine stocks again and again and again. One of the stories also leans too heavily on crude humor, even granting one of the magical artifacts the gift of flatulence. The strongest two stories find their own humor in their own world, and build to a good finale. There's also a problem with coming in on a story after the epic battle rather than before it. Names and places are tossed about with reckless abandon while I was still getting acquainted with the book. I knew I was reading the "after the battle" story, but I wasn't sure getting smacked between the eyes with such heavy info dumps so early on was necessary.
Once I passed the halfway point, I started enjoying the story. Unfortunately, the earlier deadweight and the name tangle drag it down to three stars in the ratings.

 

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